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Oct. 27th, 2004 @ 10:42 pm While You Sleep
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Date:November 5th, 2004 07:03 am (UTC)
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I have to say that you have a lot of skill at writing sensual prose. You elicit not only sight, but also touch, it's more of an experience than a short story, but that's what flash fiction usually is: a moment captured in time that holds resonance.
It's a Romantic piece, but then it's not. The guy is idealized, but his faults are brought up, it makes his a romantic figure but it also makes him more real.
I'll probably have more later, but yeah, this was great.

And welcome to 506. :)

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Date:November 8th, 2004 04:36 pm (UTC)
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Thank you - for both the welcome and the feedback.
I much prefer writing this way - a lot of sensory stimulation and not much going on. If that makes sense?!